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Heart broke I left church that day
I just could not bear to stay
And watch as you took it in
Everything come to an end

We laughed and played and joked for years
Even waded through each others tears
A friendship that, for me, rang true
I miss that me and you

I missed the best friend that I knew
Pity you didn't, couldn't, wouldn't feel it too
Now it's like it never was true
That me and you

My sweet sixteen flew away
And you asked me to stay
As your girl, a beautiful pearl
That was a whole new me and you

For me, it quickly fell apart
Starting firstly with my heart
A concept I didn't know could ring true
 The beginning of the end of me and you

I missed the best friend that I knew
Pity you didn't, couldn't, wouldn't feel it too
Now it's like it never was true
That me and you

If I could do it all over again
I would simply remain your best friend
How fast they came and how fast they flew
The best years of that me and you.
The event that inspired this is long since gone, though the echo of my mistakes still hurts.  <div>


Poem (c) Me
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:icondana1441:
Dana1441 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013

Wow! It's so beautiful!
I really like it!

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AmyNChan Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you.  *^_^*
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pinkharte Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2013  Student General Artist
Did not ask for the feels Amy.

really good job though! I really love it~
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:iconamynchan:
AmyNChan Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
^^;  I'm sorry.  but I'm glad you liked it.  *^_^*

(I'm just gonna say thanks for faving here.  *^_^*)
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Ellstra Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Deep and sad. I'm sorry you had to go for this, but the poem is amazing.
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:iconamynchan:
AmyNChan Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks, I'm glad you like it
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papyrus-tree Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013  Student Digital Artist
AMY BOO WHAT HAPPENED *cRAIS AND CUDDLES YOU*
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AmyNChan Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I had a best friend for a while, we started dating, I realized I wasn't ready and didn't know how to tell him, so I broke up with him without much explanation.  Now he hates my guts and I've felt guilty for hurting him.

But it was two years ago, so...  It shouldn't bug me so much, but it still kinda does.
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HalyPooH Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
wow. That was so sad. It kind of reminds me of what happened with my best friend last year. :/
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AmyNChan Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Sorry that happened.  :hug:
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